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MY DOLL


I have a beautiful doll,                                                    
                          Which is my soul.
She has many a kite
        And so many mates.
                                                 She has two little eyes
And loves two handsome guys,
Which are my kittens.
To the toys truly a mighty boss,
With a lovely pose.
On the hand a red rose.
When I called her to come to play
She was not in the mood.
When she was out in the woods
                                                        I searched for her but in vain.
She came in the night so late,
With a handsome mate,
In the morning she broke a vase,
And was in a trembling state.                      But whatever she does,
I’ll not punish her.
For she was given to me
By my noble father, who is very dear to me.
                                                                                         

ANUSHA.U.R.
7 yrs 

Dedicated to the doll my father gave me, my first doll that could blink. This was a consciously constructed poem, highly influenced by my brother’s maniacal need for sound at the expense of sense. Till I was nine I believed my brother was omniscient. So when he told me rhyme was more important than sense, I felt loyal but incomplete.  When he saw I was on the verge of tears since I could not think of words that rhyme, he suggested ideas and words that feature in the first stanza. He was loyal and has not claimed copyright all these years. 

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